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The bomb exploded over Hiroshima…

uniformly and devastated the city. The city was levelled by blast and fire. Fires were springing up over the wide area around the city causing a firestorm. Thousands of people were killed. The atomic bomb shattered community life and disrupted the organizations for handling the disaster. 30 percent of the population killed same as seriously injured. people coming back searching for relatives and friends and extent of their property loss . The dehoused population found refuge in countryside, city the food supply was short. 200 doctors in Hiroshima before the attack, over 90 percent were casualties. supplies were destroyed. Army hospitals were rendered unusable. 3,000 feet of ground zero were totally destroyed. mortality rate of the occupants was practically 100 percent. number of dead and injured will never be known because of the confusion. outstanding difference was the presence of radiation effects, which became unmistakable survivors of the immediate explosion who were within 3,000 feet suffered from radiation disease.

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5 shells having inscribed with strange characters that resembled written Chinese. Historians have argued about whether the tale is true. After Qing fell, China was called to use Western science and philosophy. Where archaeology could provide life of the past. Early digs focused on finding oracle bones. There is text on war and harvest, disease and childbirth; from the toothaches of kings to harm on the capital. They are many with descriptions of sacrifices of human and animal. Natural forces are feared and respected. Foreign tribes can be allies or enemies. Statement about the future used the bones to verify whether or not the event would occur. The diviners then applied a hot object until the surface cracked, oracle bones refer to persons who appear in traditional historical texts. some oracle bones discovered at Xiaotun, track more than 150 years at the end of the Shang era

Outing to celebrate the end of the school year

I am Darren Goh Xun Wei, the president of class Integrity Three, i was asked to write a report, for plans for this year's outing.

Last year's outing trip to Sentosa was fun, but had several complaints. i decided that this year's class outing would be to bottle Tree Park.

Bottle Tree park is very near to our school and is only a 20 minutes ride away. Activities in the park are plentiful as there are organic farm that grows vegetables and even marine life like, Lobsters, sea bass, giant Groupers, giant Prawns and many more. There is also large ponds storing fishes for us to fish. Pupils will be able to feed the fishes with fish food that can be bought from the counter or, bring bread to fed the fishes. There is also a restaurant at th Bottle tree park serving delicious food at low precises. You can even go prawning or fishing for a price at $20 for three hours or buy a fishing set for $10 to catch guppies in a smaller pond. there are adults there as well as a guild at the Bottle Tree park so that the pupils will be supervised.

During the past trip to Sentosa it was not a good value for money as many of the pupils have been there before, during the school holidays or when they were younger. Students had to reach school at 7 a.m in the morning to wait for the bus that took one and a half hours to reach Sentosa causing the student to be very tired. The meals at Sentosa were not provided and the children had to buy food from high priced restaurant. Parents of some children were worried as there was a lack of supervision there.

This years trip will start at 8.30 a.m as to let student have more time to sleep and the buses will arrive at 8 in the morning to prevent any delays. Students need to only pay $40 for their meals and rods for three hours . Most of the price would be subsidized by th school, so the price are restively cheap. This place started a year ago, so not many students have been there, to experience what fishes and prawns are breed and sold in markets. this is an oppunity that students will not want to miss and is a once in a life time experience.

We hope that you will choose this place for this years end of school year's outing as it is a place that the students would not want to iss and have a great time.