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Your summary, which must be in continuous writing (not note form), must not be more than 150 words (not counting the words given to help you to begin).

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The bomb exploded over Hiroshima…

uniformly and devastated the city. The city was levelled by blast and fire. Fires were springing up over the wide area around the city causing a firestorm. Thousands of people were killed. The atomic bomb shattered community life and disrupted the organizations for handling the disaster. 30 percent of the population killed same as seriously injured. people coming back searching for relatives and friends and extent of their property loss . The dehoused population found refuge in countryside, city the food supply was short. 200 doctors in Hiroshima before the attack, over 90 percent were casualties. supplies were destroyed. Army hospitals were rendered unusable. 3,000 feet of ground zero were totally destroyed. mortality rate of the occupants was practically 100 percent. number of dead and injured will never be known because of the confusion. outstanding difference was the presence of radiation effects, which became unmistakable survivors of the immediate explosion who were within 3,000 feet suffered from radiation disease.

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USE ONLY MATERIALS FROM PARAGRAPHS 1 to 6.

Your summary, which must be in continuous writing (not note form), must not be longer than 160 words, including the 10 words given below.

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1 The rediscovery of the Shang began with the discovery of …

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5 shells having inscribed with strange characters that resembled written Chinese. Historians have argued about whether the tale is true. After Qing fell, China was called to use Western science and philosophy. Where archaeology could provide life of the past. Early digs focused on finding oracle bones. There is text on war and harvest, disease and childbirth; from the toothaches of kings to harm on the capital. They are many with descriptions of sacrifices of human and animal. Natural forces are feared and respected. Foreign tribes can be allies or enemies. Statement about the future used the bones to verify whether or not the event would occur. The diviners then applied a hot object until the surface cracked, oracle bones refer to persons who appear in traditional historical texts. some oracle bones discovered at Xiaotun, track more than 150 years at the end of the Shang era

Outing to celebrate the end of the school year

I am Darren Goh Xun Wei, the president of class Integrity Three, i was asked to write a report, for plans for this year's outing.

Last year's outing trip to Sentosa was fun, but had several complaints. i decided that this year's class outing would be to bottle Tree Park.

Bottle Tree park is very near to our school and is only a 20 minutes ride away. Activities in the park are plentiful as there are organic farm that grows vegetables and even marine life like, Lobsters, sea bass, giant Groupers, giant Prawns and many more. There is also large ponds storing fishes for us to fish. Pupils will be able to feed the fishes with fish food that can be bought from the counter or, bring bread to fed the fishes. There is also a restaurant at th Bottle tree park serving delicious food at low precises. You can even go prawning or fishing for a price at $20 for three hours or buy a fishing set for $10 to catch guppies in a smaller pond. there are adults there as well as a guild at the Bottle Tree park so that the pupils will be supervised.

During the past trip to Sentosa it was not a good value for money as many of the pupils have been there before, during the school holidays or when they were younger. Students had to reach school at 7 a.m in the morning to wait for the bus that took one and a half hours to reach Sentosa causing the student to be very tired. The meals at Sentosa were not provided and the children had to buy food from high priced restaurant. Parents of some children were worried as there was a lack of supervision there.

This years trip will start at 8.30 a.m as to let student have more time to sleep and the buses will arrive at 8 in the morning to prevent any delays. Students need to only pay $40 for their meals and rods for three hours . Most of the price would be subsidized by th school, so the price are restively cheap. This place started a year ago, so not many students have been there, to experience what fishes and prawns are breed and sold in markets. this is an oppunity that students will not want to miss and is a once in a life time experience.

We hope that you will choose this place for this years end of school year's outing as it is a place that the students would not want to iss and have a great time.

englich summary

According to legend………………

A goatherd found his flock eating coffee cherries and saw soon eating with them. What used as a local food and drink for the native has changed into world wide delicacy eaten in huge amounts. Unlike Brazil, which grows a third of the world’s supply and drinks a third of their coffee sparingly. A blizzard had damaged nearly half of the country’s coffee trees a damage. tree means the loss of income for the three to five years causing coffee prices to rise, causing people to buy large amounts of coffee. Sometimes there are long periods of low prices, short periods of high ones. The solution is to limit output to the market, with reserve, and sell at reasonable prices, with a quota system to limit the outflow of beans from producing nations in times of overproduction.. These controls, the prices only until the market returns to normal.

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Lukas family was worried because ....

Lukas had disappeared in the forest, and there was no one with him. When the fog comes children are to be kept in the house. A child may be slow but he is gone before you know it, now Anna go and feach men and search for him. They called for Lukas until nightfall. The same thing happened to Malie’s aunt in Karatara. There was also a lot of elephants around the area at night and would not feel a thing if they step on a child. In every hundred paces they called out for Lukas and after the tenth call they turn back. They then light up a fire in hope to attract any lost child. In August 1865 after heavy rains a forester came and told them the he found parts of a skeleton belonging to a smallish child but it could be parts of a baboon’s skeleton.

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Lukas family was worried because..

He was missing. Anna fetch the men as she knows the footpaths and knows what to do when there are elephants.” Gertie explained. Malie, Sofie and Elias searched and called out for Lukas until dark . Willem and Kristoffel stood shocked. The last I saw of little Lukas eating his sweet potato at the corner of the house eating Willem kept repeting. Malie said concernly that during the week the elephants are eating around here and will not feel it if they stepped on a child. Anna and the men were back at midnight. Sofie made a fire in the middle of the Island when he see the glow and come back. By midday, fourteen people help and on the following morning the constable. On the fourth day twenty-four men, On the fifth day, thirty, On the sixth day there were forty. Malie and Sofie had to support Barta , looked weak and tired, and was clothed in black. Elias just hung his head and shook it slowly from side to side, refusing to admit it to the very end.

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Ever since the British left Sri Lanka in 1948, the Sinhalese people govern their country and Implemented a lot of changes.

AMITHNAL RAHUL and his younger brother Diyon Ranuga were walking their way back home from their part time work as tea boys.

“ Boys! You are back just in time for my vegetable curry to be finish for dinner.” their mother Kalathma Subaja opening her hands to welcoming them back. “I know that you will like it.” she continued in a tempting speech.

“ We made 7 Ruppies today enough to pay for our school fees if we add the up with what we earn during the last three weeks.” RANUGA said excitedly

“ OK . Boys just go and get ready to eat dinner while I close the door.” replied their mother.

As the three of them sat around the food chanting their prayers they were interrupted by a phone call rang, . Their mother went to pick it up, it was their father Suvik Vinsadva.

As their mother put down the phone she said “ Your father would be coming back rather late as he needs to do double shifts.”

“ So what are you going to do when you get your O' level results back Rahul ?” Ranuga asked curiously.

“ Well I thought of going to Uva Wellassa University, which is one of the best university in Sri Lanka as my results are the top in the school, but my Sinhalese still needs to improve as it is needed in Sri Lanka now since the Official Language Act in 1956.” RAHUL replied while taking a sip of water. “But later after I graduate, I will find a high paying job to buy the dream house that mum always wanted , the car that dad always wanted and the toy you always wanted.” Rahul assured Ranuga

As the days go by Rahul got more eager and eager to see his results. Telling every body what he would do when he get it back.


“Mom, Mom, guess what I got back from school. It is my O' level slip and I got 3A2s, 2B3s and my Sinhalese got a B4” RAHUL came running back home waving a piece of paper.

At the very next day, Rahul went to the university to apply for the school administration. When he came back his face was in a glum state, as the whole family sat around the table Rahul explained “ The university said that I needed 4A1s and 2B3s to go in to the university and the university that accept me is the one that is nine kilometers away from home and is one of the worst university. And the Sinhalese who got lower than me got in.”

“ My forefathers came to Sri Lanka to get a better life and they have it, now look at us when the British left Ban Dara Non Ke took the government and made all this policies like the Resettlement policy in 1950s, the Sinhalese people move to our lands and took our fertile land and jobs away from us.” their father interrupted as he came through the door.

During the next few days Rahul work as a low paying cashier in a supermarket earning up to 32 ruppies a day. This continued until Ranuga also took his O' level but cannot enter the university due to the same reason as RAHUL.

They then heard about Kumaratanga recruiting people for the Tamil Tigers as group that has enough of the Sinhalese government and had taken arms to fight their way to freedom.

They both join and was thought how to fire weapons and military combat for their attack on the Sinhalese, as well as helping to recruit more Tamils for the Tamil Tigers, while waiting for the day to attack the Sinhalese people.

“The day is finally here, the rotten Sinhalese has always push us around, but not anymore today they will remembers us on 1983 when we the Tamils will stand up and fight for their freedom.” Rahul shouted to his troops shooting his fist into the air. “This is for our freedom, long live the Tamil tigers.” he continued.

“Long live Tamil Tigers! Long live Tamil Tigers!” went his Tamil troops punching their fist into the air.